Euthanasia and Assisted Suicide: A Sign of Mercy or Murder?
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwIPXAvRDpArUU9VMzBoc1RLeDQ/edit
This is the link where you guys can edit my paper. Sorry for the confusion...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1anWNxfWnJwU3KZOOtoQlsY9evSj_01zcJD3Y-Gte5N0/edit
I tried to edit your paper but I think I accidentally created another version of it. Here is the link to it with my edits: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rjo-DAGMxWrKqxGNTLEI2R0GRZNx9dykx-R-_6H0Ykk/edit
ReplyDeleteThanks for your editing comments...I am having trouble trying to get this to where it cna be edited....
DeleteI don't think your paper is able to be edited. But I think it's extremely well written and you brought up a lot of great points. The only grammatical error I noticed was on page 4. In the sentence that starts off, "He starts by drinking a clear liquid...", I think the "then death" is a little awkward so you might want to reword it. But other than that I think you're fine!
ReplyDeletethanks for your comments
DeleteI liked the cartoons you used in your paper and how you incorporate them.
ReplyDeleteThanks ......
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